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12月30日

Non Commercial Break Two-one

Another piece that survived from 2nd Nov 2006 AD.
 
It's Unfinished Script, This time. The Story is based on Twilight Gardian, but T.G now has far gone. Only the Orphan Left.
Named  Corner
 
 
                                         Corner
                                           by
                                     Aaron Huang
 
 
                EXT. SOMEWHERE NEW BUILDING ARE BEING BUILT. - EVENING
 
                Camera cuts from one building to another. Showing the
                evening urban city view with a lot of building under
                construction.
 
                                                                 CUT TO:
 
 
 
                EXT. SOMEWHERE IN THE CITY. - EVENING
 
                Cars are lining up towards west on the road and tail
                lights are blood red. We can see ? Beautiful Sunset at
                the beginning of the car queue. Clouds are painted rose
                red and purple and formed unusual shape.
 
                                                                 CUT TO:
 
 
 
                EXT. BUS STOP. - EVENING
 
                A bus drives into the frame, stop for a while and drives
                away. At the bus stop two girl just get off the bus
                talking to each other happily. We can hear the laughter
                once a while.
 
                                                                 CUT TO:
 
 
 
                EXT. STREET. - EVENING
 
                A sequence of wide shot showing two girls walking on the
                road. Two girls standing on the street. Waving hands to
                each other.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          Bye. See you tomorrow.
 
                                      GIRLFRIEND
                          Bye.
 
                Sammy walks along on the street. She walks by a house
                where a dog in the house is barking at her. And a house
                where a mom is standing at the door way calling her son
                home for dinner. She is playing with an apple that she
                had in hand. She throws the apple up high in the air and
                catches it. She is doing this repeatly. And suddenly
                there is a group of children rush out from the street
                corner. She missed the apple when she tries to avoid
                hitting the children.
                The apple falls on the ground and rolls toward the corner
                stops when hits the wall. She turn around and watch the
                children running away waving hands to her saying sorry.
 
                She smiles. And kneels down to pick up the apple. She
                sees a drawing on the wall at the corner where the apple
                stops. It is very small drawing, draw with some kind of
                stone. More like a carving. It is a carving of an angel.
                She picks up the apple and look at the direction where
                the children ran away, and smiles.
 
 
 
                EXT. OUTSIDE OF SAMMY'S HOUSE - EVENING
 
                She opens the mail box, takes out letters and walks
                towards door while checking the letter. She opens the
                letters one by one, not reading, just checking the
                senders. She take a big exhale. Looks quite disappointed.
                She takes out keys and opens the door.
 
                                                          FADE TO BLACK.
 
 
 
                INT. SAMMY'S HOUSE. -NIGHT.
 
                Letters and bills are piling up on the table. Sammy sits
                at the window. She looks out the window and seems quite
                lonely. Phone rings. Sammy picks up the phone.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          ...
 
                Cut to the EXT shot showing Sammy talking through the
                phone. Cut back.
 
                                      SAMMY (CONT'D)
                          No. Still Haven't heard from her. How
                          about you?
                                 (sammy seems worried.)
                          Have you eaten? You should find yourself
                          something to eat....En. I will..
                                (she takes deep breath.)
                          You take care. OK? I will call you...
 
                She hangs up the phone.
 
 
 
                EXT. BUS STOP. - EVENING
 
                Sammy and her girlfriend get off the bus start to walk
                home.
 
 
 
                EXT. STREET. - EVENING
 
                Sammy says goodbye to her friend. And starts to walk
                along. She walks by a house where a dog in the house is
                barking at her. She walks by a house where a mother is
                calling her son for dinner. Then she walks around the
                corner. She saw a group of kids was playing cricket at
                the corner. And then Sammy hears a piece of music is
                playing around the corner. She then notice a Young man is
                standing at the opposite side of the corner and he is
                playing a violin. Sammy is surprised. She stares at the
                young for quite a while. The young man looks up and sees
                Sammy. He lower his head continues playing violin. Kids
                are have fun with he cricket ball. For while, the young
                man notice that Sammy is still staring at the his
                direction, he stops, turns his head around as if he is
                checking if Sammy is looking at someone else at his back.
                There is no one there. He then turns back and look at
                Sammy. He looks curious. He turn his eyes to the kids and
                then looks back at Sammy; he stops playing the violin.
                The moment seems freeze as the music stop; kids' laughter
                are silent now, the corner is freezed. He then changes a
                posture, reposition his violin a bit. Then he looks at
                Sammy, with his head noding, one, two and three. He plays
                a new tone with his violin. This piece is now lively,
                happy and a bit naughty.  The whole corner becomes alive
                at once. Kids are laughing again, wind blows, dog barks.
                The young man keep playing the violin as he stares at
                Sammy. Sammy starts to realizes her rudeness and quickly
                lower her head and walks forth. The young man's violin
                follows her pace become quicker and quicker. Sammy's face
                turns red. She keeps walking forth passes the kids, and a
                tree and finally. Ban. She hits on another tree that in
                front of her.
 
                                                          FADE TO BLACK.
 
 
 
                EXT.SOMEWHERE NEAR THE CORNER. -EVENING.
 
                Sammy and the young man sit on a bench under the tree.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          So you live here?
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Yes. Right there.
 
                He points at the corner.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          Oh! There. I was always wondering who
                          might be living in THAT house.
 
                The young man smiles.
 
                                      SAMMY (CONT'D)
                          So... it's you.
                                (Sammy covers her forehead
                                 with one hand.)
                          So... I bet you just moved in, right?
                          Coz' I've never saw you around before.
                          especially with this...
 
                She points at Violin.
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Ah. This. Yes. I love violin... But, No.
                          I... I have been there for quite a while.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          OK.
                                (She nodes. Doesn't seems to
                                 care about that.)
                          Good.
 
                They two silent for a while.
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Are you feeling better now?
 
                                      SAMMY
                          Oh.Yes. Yes. Much better now. This...
                                (She takes off her hand which
                                 was covering her forehead,
                                 there is a piece of leave in
                                 her hand.)
                          Really helps. Where did you learn that?
                          That's weird.
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          From an ancient treatment. The scratch
                          will be gone by tomorrow dawn. 
 
                                      SAMMY
                          INTERESTING.
                                (she doesn't look impressed)
 
                Young man smiles.
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Do you have apiece of paper?
 
                                      SAMMY
                          Yes. Why?
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Give me a piece. I'll show you something.
 
                Sammy takes out a note book; tears off a page and gives
                it to the young man.
 
                The young man takes the paper, folds it edge to edge, and
                fold again and again and again until the piece of paper
                is half of his palm. He puts it into his palm; covers it
                with two hands. He then gently blows to the paper in his
                hand. And opens up the palm. It is paper fox in there.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          Whao. Cool. How did you do that.
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Miracle.
 
                                      SAMMY
                                (looks at the fox.)
                          And... What is this.
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          It's Wila.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          Wila? Who?
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Wila. The dog. At the corner.
 
                                      SAMMY
                                (Sammy lift her eyebrow
                                 lightlt.)
                          Ah. Is that so. I thought it was a fox.
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Well. It's a dog.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          En. Nice. Make me a fox then.
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Ok.
 
                The young man repeats his magic. A paper fox standing in
                his palm.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          But I thought that was a dog.
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Well. It is a fox. They all look the same
                          don't they.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          Ok. Make me a... a...giraffe then.
 
                The young man repeat his magic. A paper fox stangs at his
                palm.
 
                                      SAMMY (CONT'D)
                          Whao...Whao. That... is... SOMETHING!
                                (She looks at the three foxes
                                 on the bench.)
                          Really...refresh... En... Magic.
                          Impressed. Who taught you that?
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Ryan.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          Ryan who?
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Ryan caraway. The kid.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          Ok. Good.
                                (She then plays with the
                                 three fox for a while.)
 
                They silent for a while.
 
                                      SAMMY (CONT'D)
                          Listen. I have to go now. I will see you
                          tomorrow Ok?
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          Sure. See you tomorrow.
 
                Sammy gets up. Takes the tree fox and stuffs it into her
                bag.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          I'll take this. Thanks for your magic.
 
                                      YOUNG MAN
                          My pleasure.
 
                                      SAMMY
                          Bye.
 
                The young man nodes to her. And watchs her goes away.

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